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>> Sunday, August 29, 2010

okaay,,whos good at figuring out thee "cool" thinggs in poeemsss??
I need thiss for schoooool,quickk smaartt!
caan uu heeelppp??

This is a poeem i have to do (andd read outt to the class:|) read throughh and comment the techniques you see in the poeem,,and the little metaphors, similes, and all thaat stuff. i reeaally need help with thiss and reeaally soon,,so commentt -- pleeeaase:D it wouldd be heeaaps of helpp for mee :) soo-- tthankyouu!!

What Is Hope?

What hope means
Hope is bright shining light which keeps darkness at the bay
Hope is gentle cold breeze on a hot summer day
Hope is to remain positive when going gets tough
hope is seeking more when others think u had enough

What hope means

Hope is dreaming of tommorow
Hope is simmering under sorrow
Hope is sparkles when tears in our eyes
Hope is a beautiful thing & beutiful things never dies

What hope means

Hope is as light as a feather
Hope keeps all of us together

Hope is ubiquitous and free of cost
hope is the last thing ever lost...

so mucch thankss if you doo comment && stuff :)


5 girls have given hope:

Bethany August 30, 2010 at 7:00 AM  

I found a simile in this line: Hope is as light as a feather. (the word as indicates it is a simile)

Hope is bright shining light...Hope is gentle cold breeze...Hope is sparkles....those are all metaphors.

As for techniques -- don't ask me. :D


anna :) August 30, 2010 at 11:52 AM  

this is a really great poem libby :)

metaphors? anything that says hope is...

similes? anything that says hope is like...

hope this helps! hahaha :D

Holly,  August 30, 2010 at 9:59 PM  

Hey! Love the poem!! Great job!!!!

Abbie August 31, 2010 at 10:39 AM  

That's such an awesome poem! I like the "cool breeze on a hot summer day" metaphor!

Love, Abbie =D x0x0x0x

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